Two Sides Of The Story – Student Reflection

After an extended length of time working through Part 1 eventually submitted my ‘Both Sides Of The Story’ assignment to my tutor. The feedback [1] I received was encouraging and supportive even though my intention for the assignment was deemed not to be hugely successful. Significantly I enjoyed the process and was keen to take on board what was said and move on to Part 2 of the course.

The first aspect that I needed to attend to was the organisation of this website. My tutor said I had too many duplicate posts and the design of the menu structure made it difficult to make sense of the content. I remedied the issues immediately after the session and the changes are now in place. Posts are now found in a single menu location and also within single categories.

I was pleased that my tutor appreciated the research, development and context work I had put in to part one and the assignment.

Although he felt my assignment idea was fine but he felt it did not convey my intention. If they were to be journalistic then each image needed to convey the story I was telling. His observation on my first ‘Labour’ image was that it didn’t actually provide a pleasant scene, in fact he felt the opposite. The ‘Blue’ set were regarded as the more successful set of the two which I agreed with.

One key intention I had was to include people in the images. I was commended for trying this and was informed how difficult it was to capture expressions by getting in and close to people. Ultimately he felt these were the least successful images. Observations included feeling that people walking out of the frame conveyed a negative feeling. Additionally it was his opinion that the lady I thought was smiling happily actually conveyed a tense/stressed feeling. It was interesting to note how two people can view an image and draw different conclusions. The important learning aspect for me was that I had had the experience of meeting her and brought more context to it than someone viewing the stand alone image on a learning log.

Overall I had a positive feeling about the work I was doing and my progress on the new module. I understood what my tutor was saying and could see his point of view. I was relieved to get this first session done as I was apprehensive about starting a new working relationship with a new tutor.

References:

  1. Assignment 1 Tutor Feedback

Two Sides Of The Story – Tutor Feedback

After an extended length of time working through Part 1 eventually submitted my ‘Both Sides Of The Story’ assignment to my tutor. The feedback [1] I received was encouraging and supportive even though my intention for the assignment was deemed not to be hugely successful. Significantly I enjoyed the process and was keen to take on board what was said and move on to Part 2 of the course.

My reflection can be found in the post here.

References:

  1. Assignment 1 Tutor Feedback

Two Sides of The Story – Self Evaluation

Demonstration of Technical and Visual Skills

All images were hand held with a crop sensor DSLR, all taken in manual mode.

As it was a journalistic piece I have got closer to the subject remembering the Robert Capa quote “If your pictures aren’t good enough, you aren’t close enough.”. Obviously just getting close doesn’t improve the picture but for a journalistic piece the message needs to be conveyed reasonably quickly.

Looking at the EXIF data of my selects I am surprised to find that I took the ‘poppy’ image at f22 and still managed to achieve the blurring of the sign. I guess it was due to how close I was to the poppy and the fact that it was quite bright and so needed a smaller aperture. There was also a breeze and I needed a fast shutter speed.

The contact sheets show that I had exposure issues early on in the shoot which is a reminder to keep an eye on the light meter when in manual mode.

Most of the images taken for this assignment were candid however I did ask two of my subjects if it was ok to take their picture and also asked them to go back and walk past me once more. The image of the lady with the polling sign arrows pointing at her head appears to be the most ‘posed’ but in fact was a quick grab shot as I was being asked to move on by a polling station official

Demonstration of Creativity

Creatively, I have returned to a subject that I used last year for the EU referendum in assignment 2 of EYV. The brief and emphasis of the first part of the course on documentary led me fairly quickly to politics as my subject. This was my first return to taking images of people since my Square Mile assignment in April 2016.

Nobody expressed a problem with me firing off shots as they entered or exited polling stations. Unlike last year when I wasn’t actually taking pictures of people but a lady took offence anyway for me being there with a camera.

I have concentrated on the colour palette of red and blue when identifying a shot and in my decision making for the final selects. The vibrancy of the red poppy and the ‘Priti Patel’ (government minister, Witham MP and leading Brexit chearleader) sign make this the strongest image and most creative.

I feel the least creative are the ones where smiling people are the subject. Although they do have a place in the set as they are important to the message I want to convey.

Context

I specifically researched Don McCullin for this assignment and the film about his work gave a great insight of photojournalism. Although he was predominantly a war photographer and the film’s emphasis was about his presence in war zones, I found the aspect of his relationship with his editor fascinating. It highlighted how much journalism has changed in the last two decades. McCullin was trusted to capture the scenes however he wanted without any editorial influence. At the point that changed he moved on.

My assignment examines how it is possible to take multiple images but pick the ones that match the chosen editorial message. This is quite a powerful tool when consciously selling a message to an unsuspecting public. Although with the increasing number of people getting news from social media and online outlets this lessens that impact. In fact it has led to people only reading and seeing things in their own bubble which has its own issues with bias.

 

Quality of Outcome

My images are not dramatic and do not convey emotion or distress. They are fairly mundane and would be stronger when sitting alongside text in a newspaper supplement. I would be interested in mocking up an example layout but currently have no publishing tools that are efficient enough to make the exercise worth while at this stage.

I have shown the images to peers where initially they were unsure until I explained the brief and my idea for them being in a newspaper supplement article. Even so it does suggest that they may not be as good as I think. I have enjoyed the exercise and chosen a subject that I am interested in which hopefully comes across in the outcome.

 

Two Sides of The Story – Contact Sheets and Edit

To recap, the aim was to capture positive and negative images for each of the two main political parties. The images would be used in a ‘left leaning’ newspaper Sunday supplement style article and required a journalistic flavour rather than an ‘arty’ approach. The article would be written as a non-biased piece but the images would be pushing an opinion in the readers subconscious.

The shortlist ultimately determined the two sets I would submit: Pro Labour/Anti Tory or Anti Labour/Pro Tory. Note that I am a Labour supporter and I decided on Pro Labour/Anti Tory.

I have split the contact sheets in to each of the locations I visited. I will discuss in each section my experience, what images worked, which ones didn’t, and the reason for my final picks.


Location #1 – Witham Labour Headquarters, Collingwood Road, Witham

Having parked my car in the Labour HQ car park I went in to the office to ask if it was ok to shoot around the forecourt area. I asked if their was a photo opportunity of the local candidates but found that Priti Patel (Con) actually lived in Hertfordshire and would be voting there. The Labour candidate, who had no chance of winning as this is a very safe Tory seat, would be with his wife who was in hospital. A very subdued start and an actual flavour of the reality of most constituencies across the country where only a handful of constituents could influence the outcome in marginal seats.

The labour sign was the main subject here where I tried close-ups and wider angles with various depths of field. My wider angle shots captured traffic and pedestrians in the background. Most of these were a bit messy as positions of vehicles and people were too random. Also I was still having self inflicted exposure issues

Two ‘negative’ images were the strongest of this set. The road signs image(DSC_9686) offered a street photography feel and the red/blue combination I was after. The obscured blurred Labour sign and the bush of thorns in DSC_9698 was also a strong image but maybe too much blur for photo journalism.

Although I thought these were the stronger images my final select was based on my decision to submit a positive Labour set and a negative Tory set. This was based on the strength of images across all of the locations.

My final pick is DSC_9712, a straight forward image but fairly clean and pleasant which conveyed a positive feeling. DSC_9682 is a good stock image but too obvious for the reader/viewer.


Location #2 – Rickstones Pavillion, Witham

I used this location in 2016 and was hoping to a capture the red and blue doors only to find a new paint job had spoilt my plans. Not very busy at this location so didn’t stay long. I liked the dumped bike on the ground alongside the sign but I needed blue or red to fit my idea.


Location #3 – Templars School, Witham

Here I concentrated on the walkway leading in to the polling station. Having captured some candid images of unsuspecting voters I got in to conversation with the couple in red and blue jackets and told them about my assignment. They were happy to go back and walk towards me so that I could get some front facing images. They were quite stiff and unnatural but I managed some where they were not looking at the camera but smiling as if in conversation with each other. I chose DSC_9769 where the gentleman in the red jacket was the dominant figure which I could use as a positive Labour image. If I needed a positive Conservative image I would have cropped one of the images where the lady is smiling but putting the man at the edge.

At this location I also took the backs of a family where one of the people was carrying a bag with white and blue flowers on it. I felt this was a good negative Conservative image as we could not see their faces and there was something suspicious about that. I selected DSC_9747 as my select from this set. 


Location #4 – Notley High School, Braintree

Having started taking pictures at Notley High School, which I thought was on a non school day, I was asked to stop as the school was actually open. I understood although I was disappointed as the entrance to the hall had a multi-blue toned facia.


Location #5 – Golf Club, Witham

Having returned to Witham where I knew that there was a large Tory sign in a field opposite the golf course. Luckily the sign had become crumpled by the wind which I felt made a good negative Tory image.

I concentrated on capturing cars (usually red) passing the blue sign but kicked myself for missing the chance to capture a red Royal Mail van. I chose DSC_9820 as it included the back of a bright red car driving away leaving behind the broken sign in the background.

On walking across the road to get a different angle on the sign I was fortunate to find wild poppies growing on the grass verge. I spent a lot of time on this as I felt the vibrant red poppy growing out of the wild grass was fighting to overcome the blue sign in the background. I chose DSC_9889 which was in landscape which I needed for the set although there were a number of portrait versions that I could have picked.


Location #6 – Maldon Road, Witham

Another sign that I saw on my research visit was in Maldon Road. This sign was in good condition in well kept front garden and would be included in a positive Conservative set.

I also took a couple of pictures where the bins were more prominent but none made my final select as I had already selected better images which included the same signage.


Location #7 – Parkside Youth Centre, Witham

Another location I used last year that, within a couple of strides offered a view of the polling station entrance and the mini roundabout. The entrance was of interest due to the blue doors. Although I captured people walking in and out I decided on the empty chair image which I felt conveyed an unsettling vacant feeling. For this reason I chose DSC_0007 as a negative Conservative image.

With the roundabout and fence images I captured red and blue cars being obstructed by the fence and back to front sign. Depending on which story was chosen I would pick a red car and blue car version. My final pick was DSC_9985 which looked like the blue car was about to crash in to the railings.


Location #8 – Dengie Close Community Hall, Witham

The highlight here was the lady with the lady with the red rose print top. I had noticed her on the way in and struck up a conversation with her as she left. She was also happy to retrace her steps so that I could get more images. I chose DSC_0050 as she looked happy and the sun was shining on her.


Location #9 – Chipping Hill School, Witham

Another location that was short lived as the school was open. I managed to get a lady walking past whilst I was in conversation with a member of the polling station staff.  DSC_0067 was my pick due to the humour of the arrows and her smiling face. Her red hair and purple polo shirt was enough to include in my positive Labour set.


Location #10 – Spinks Lane Sports Hall, Witham

The door being held by a red and blue bungee chord tied to blue railings caught my eye. The array of signage was also key to the shot. My pick was DSC_0088 of a man who, at the point I captured him, looked annoyed and grumpy which I felt fit a negative ‘Tory’ set of images.

I have no idea what political persuasion these people are and for this image I did feel I was taking advantage of him as I was using him in a negative way. It was noticeable that I didn’t feel the same about the other people I had taken as I wasn’t  portraying them in a negative manner. I am sure the man would agree I wasn’t capturing him at his best.


Location #11 – Highfields Road, Witham

My final location was of a row of signs. Unfortunately only two and on reviewing I was disappointed that I hadn’t captured more of the parked car in the frame.

Two Sides of The Story – New Opportunity

Having already played around with the idea of two sides being ‘Red v Blue’, Theresa May offered me a chance to use the idea in a real general election.

My initial idea of using abstract images didn’t fit the documentary genre that was being covered by this part of the course. However, I now had an opportunity to use my experience of the EU Referendum in 2016 and see if I could produce something new using the same theme. I like the idea of taking of using previous ideas rather than lurching from one subject to another although I am aware that this may attract criticism for being ‘samey’.

I drove round the polling station locations on the weekend prior to the election looking out for election signs and possibilities of compositions with reds and blues. In addition to polling station locations I identified sites where party signs were displayed and noted these as suitable for Thursday’s election.

Rightly or wrongly I didn’t take any practice shots on this visit. My aim was to capture people at polling stations and the locations were empty at the weekend. I had worked at these locations the previous year and was comfortable that I knew them well enough.

Even if I wasn’t going to produce images good enough for the assignment, I wanted to capture the event from a documentary and journalistic point of view. The work is not only about national politics but also about my locality and the impact of national government on my community.

Two Sides of The Story – Submission

The assignment brief was to ‘Create at least two sets of photographs telling different versions of the same story’. I have chosen to tell the story of party politics. The written press have historically been extremely influential in setting the political agenda. With the increase in social media and the mass volume of images, methods of communication and influence has changed. My assignment is a photojournalism piece showing how images can be taken and selected for publication to portray a biased message.

With my initial idea of Red (Good) and Blue (Bad) it transpired that the country was going to the polls. This was an opportunity that I wanted to take as it followed on from my EU Referendum [1] assignment in the EYV module. Interestingly the calling of the election was directly attributed to the Brexit vote and I saw it as a type of ‘aftermath’.

This time I wanted to include people going to the polling stations and capture their expressions. I would specifically pick fun and friendly people and add them to the positive ‘Red’ set. The more neutral and unfriendly people would be applied to the negative ‘Blue’ set. Although predominantly a photojournalism exercise I also needed to take contextual images of party signs so that each set had a political anchor. With more time and research I would like to have found settings where blue/red tones would convey the political slant.

The images would be placed in a ‘left leaning’ Sunday Supplement immediately following an election. Following a Labour victory the ‘Red’ set would be published alongside a positive upbeat election story. The ‘Blue’ set would be printed alongside a negative down beat article following a Conservative victory.

The Sunday supplement idea came from my research in to Don McCullin [2] who is best known for his war photography printed in The Times Sunday supplement in the 60s and 70s. Today it seems all print media has corporate backers and some editors make out they are impartial. When The Times was taken over in the 80s McCullin found that he no longer had creative control and subsequently moved on to other things.

My submission attempts to show that images can influence the viewers and readers in printed media. During the edit I found that I had a reasonable set of 10 images to make a ‘Positive Labour’ set of 5 and a ‘Negative Conservative’ set. During the shoot I took combinations to include both sides for each party. In some ways I feel that I could have achieved a stronger set if I only had to focus on one ‘angle’. Admittedly it was my decision to use the day of a General Election and so immediately provided myself with a challenge to do it all  on one day.

Positive Labour

 

Negative Conservative

References

  1. https://ocamartynrainbird.wordpress.com/2016/06/28/collecting-submission/
  2. Don McCullin post

Two Sides Of The Story – Initial Ideas

Having read through the course notes I thought I would start working on Assignment One as I progressed through part one.

In EYV I tended to go for socio political subjects as it is something I have an interest in and feel that this has the opportunity to project in to my images.

As assignment one was ‘Two Sides to the Story’ I thought I would continue from assignment five of EYV where I attempted to capture ‘two sides of a debate’. The debate being nationalisation. The finished set was probably a bit vague and did not convey my intentions expressed in my essay. So although not entirely successful I liked the idea and thought I would try out some more left/right ideas by using the colours red and blue.

I tried to create red images that were pleasant and comforting. I wanted to contrast these with blue images that were unpleasant and uncomfortable.

Having taken them a couple of weeks ago I am now returning to the idea having worked through the photojournalism course notes. My conclusion is that these images are too abstract and I feel I need to include people in the images.

As there is another election I am now considering extending my EU referendum assignment and covering the General Election as a form of ‘aftermath’ photography. My thoughts are now to get images of people at polling stations or outside party offices where there are blue and red hints of colour and backgrounds.

I have taken the day off of work to spend the day being a photojournalist. If successful I will submit two sets – one red, one blue – for my assignment submission.